Oh my gosh...that is amazing!! The tension is so good there.

Intriguing how the tension between the supernatural realm and the physical realm interplay here. The pacing is perfect that you feel the tension and confusion the people face. It leaves you questioning what will happen next and why such unnatural things happen. A great start to an excellent story!

Love this! There is an immediate fantasy vibe from the first phrases, specifically the prophecy that suggest a doomed future is ahead. This hooks the reader because now we all want to know how the king will attempt to save his people from death and how he will defeat the queen.

Awesome! Thank you!! :)

Yes, I would find use for that! Thank you!!