Wow! Concise but packed with so many emotions and the hints of danger approaching?! You have a beautiful way of drawing the reader into the scene.

Oh my gosh...that is amazing!! The tension is so good there.

Love this! There is an immediate fantasy vibe from the first phrases, specifically the prophecy that suggest a doomed future is ahead. This hooks the reader because now we all want to know how the king will attempt to save his people from death and how he will defeat the queen.

Awesome! Thank you!! :)

Yes, I would find use for that! Thank you!!