Fantastic. Loved this.

PS I want to know what happens... I know we are supposed to have multiple contributors yet this is where the failings in that model arise. One mind is required for great writing.

I read it all. I thought it was beautifully written, but have to say I choked on the non binary alien reveal. It may confuse a casual reader over the age of 40. It may 'alienate' (see what I did there?) a large percentage of readers. I truly thought there was a lot of talent there and apart from my chapter (obviously, ha, ha)... The best thing I've seen on here. Wishing you all the best.