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Chapter 11: A place like home

PrimordialKaos Fantasy 27 Nov 2025

It had been many years since he'd been home. Since he'd sat down with his brother in the evenings.

But yet he walked.

So long ago was the past. So much pain it held.

And so he walked, and walked, and walked into the sunset.


He was a farmer at heart. He had loved his crops, more than he loved his brother, more than he loved his god. He loved his wheat, and his barley, and his orchard, they were all he cared for. Not anymore.

His brother was dead, and so were his crops, everything near and dear to him, gone in the blink of the eyes.


Now he roamed the paths of the world searching for a new home, or companions to aid him in his new calling, he was not sure.

He slowly became a living legend, a passing rumor. Of a man who survived a god's wrath. And now he was going to kill that god.

Chapter 22: Ashes of a Life

Chesterfield Fantasy 5 Sep 2026

It had been many years since he had been home, since evenings were spent beside his brother under a quiet sky. Now there was only distance, but still, he walked. The past felt far away, yet its weight followed him, heavy and unrelenting, as he moved toward a horizon that never seemed to change.

He had once been a farmer, a man who lived for the land. He loved his wheat, his barley, his orchard more than anything else, more than blood, more than faith. But that life was gone. His brother was dead, his crops destroyed. Everything he had built, lost in a single, merciless moment.

His farm had been beside the River Clyde, upstream from the great Firth. He and his brother had cherished their croft. They worked hard, and the farm had prospered. Now, all was gone. The barn and the cottage were now ruins; all that remained was ashes and stones. The grain fields had been torched and trampled. The fruit trees of the orchard had vanished, chopped down for firewood.

As the sun rose above the horizon, he came to the banks of the River Clyde – a wide, slow-moving serpent of silver cutting through the land. Mist clung to its surface, drifting like lost spirits. He knelt at the edge of the stream and cupped water in his hands. It tasted of silt and memory.

He had crossed this river once before, many years ago. Back then, he had been younger, hopeful, carrying sacks of seed and dreaming of harvests. His brother had walked beside him, laughing at something trivial. He tried to recall the sound of that laugh now, but it slipped away like water through fingers.

A branch snapped behind him.

He rose, hand reaching for the knife at his belt.

A man stepped from the trees—broad-shouldered, scarred, carrying a spear. His clothes were patched, his eyes sharp. Not a bandit. Not a soldier. Something in between.

“You’re far from any safe road,” the stranger said.

“So are you.”

The man chuckled. “Fair enough. But I’m here for a reason. Word is, a wandering peregrine passed through the ruins last night. A man who survived the god’s fire.”

He said nothing.

The stranger studied him. “You don’t look like much.”

“I’m not.”

“That’s what they say makes you dangerous.”

A long silence stretched between them, filled only by the murmur of the river.

Finally, the stranger planted his spear in the ground. “Name’s Ralven. I’m with the ones gathering in the mountains. We’re building something—an army, a refuge, a chance. Depends who you ask.”

He waited for a response. None came.

The enigmatic stranger studied the wanderer’s face and looked deeply into his eyes; no, not his eyes but his soul. He saw intense grief and loneliness. He asked, “Do you have a name?”

“Doran.”

Ralven sighed. “Look. If you’re the man they say you are, we could use you. If you’re not… well, we could still use another pair of hands.”

The wanderer looked across the river. The mountains loomed in the distance, jagged and dark, like teeth waiting to bite.

He thought of his brother. He thought of his fields. He thought of the god who had taken everything.

“I’m going to kill him,” he said quietly.

Ralven blinked. “The god?”

“Yes.”

A slow grin spread across Ralven’s face. “Then you’ll fit right in.”

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