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Chapter 11: 12 Voices [Eleanor Hartwick]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 4 May 2026

The morning light filtered through the kitchen window of Thornfield Manor, casting long shadows across the marble countertops. I'd been the head chef here for nearly twenty years, and I knew every corner of this grand old house better than I knew my own reflection. But nothing could have prepared me for what I found that Tuesday morning in October.

I arrived at half past six, as I always did, to prepare breakfast for the household. The kitchen was my domain, and I took pride in the soufflés that rose perfectly every time and the fresh bread that filled the corridors with warmth. That morning, I'd planned something special: Lord Ashworth's favourite kedgeree, with fresh herbs from the garden.

The back door was unlocked, which struck me as odd. Lord Ashworth was meticulous about security, especially after the incident with the jewellery three years ago. I pushed it open carefully, listening for any sound from the house. Nothing but the grandfather clock in the hall, ticking away the seconds.

I made my way through the servants' corridor, my footsteps echoing on the stone floor. The library was on my route to the study where I sometimes left notes about special dietary requirements. As I passed the heavy oak door, something made me stop. It was slightly ajar, and I noticed a strange smell—something metallic and wrong.

I pushed the door open.

Lord Ashworth was slumped in his leather chair, his head tilted back. At first, I thought he was sleeping, but then I saw the letter opener protruding from his chest, the ornate handle catching the early morning light. His silk dressing gown was dark with blood, and his face had taken on a waxy, pale quality that made my stomach lurch.

I didn't scream. I'm not the screaming type. Instead, I stood there, my hand still on the doorframe, and felt the world tilt slightly beneath my feet. My mind registered details with strange clarity: the way his fingers hung limply over the armrest, the half-finished glass of brandy on the side table, the open window behind his chair.

Then I moved. My training kicked in, and I reached for the telephone in the hall with shaking hands. The police. I needed to call the police. My voice sounded strange and distant as I gave the operator the details, and I found myself sitting on the bottom step of the grand staircase, still in my coat, waiting for the sirens I could hear approaching in the distance.

Twenty years of service, and I'd never imagined ending it like this. Lord Ashworth had been difficult, certainly—demanding and often cruel in his cutting remarks—but he hadn't deserved this. No one deserved this.

As the first police car pulled up the long gravel drive, I realized that everything had changed. The comfortable routine of Thornfield Manor was shattered, and whatever came next would be far darker than anything these old walls had witnessed in their three-hundred-year history.

Chapter 22: A Detective Awakens [Detective Sergeant Jacob Archer]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 5 May 2026

The call came through at six fifty-two on a Tuesday morning, and I was still halfway through my first coffee at the station. At twenty-three, I was the youngest detective sergeant in the Devon and Cornwall Police, and I still got the early shifts that nobody else wanted. I didn't mind. I'd wanted to be a detective since I was twelve years old, and I wasn't about to complain about early mornings.

"Suspicious death at Thornfield Manor," my supervisor, DCI Leslie Smith, said as she appeared at my desk with her own coffee. She was in her mid-thirties, with sharp eyes that missed nothing and a reputation for closing cases that other officers had written off. "Looks like murder. You're with me."

I grabbed my jacket and followed her to the car, my heart already racing. This was my third month as a detective, and I'd only worked property crimes and petty theft before. A murder at one of the county's most prestigious estates would be significant.

The drive took twenty minutes, and Leslie filled me in on what we knew. The victim was Lord Ashworth, a seventy-two-year-old retired businessman with a reputation for being difficult. The house staff had discovered the body. No signs of forced entry, which suggested the killer knew how to access the house.

"Keep your eyes open," Leslie said as she navigated the winding country roads. "Everything means something. The smallest detail could be what breaks the case."

Thornfield Manor was every bit as impressive as I'd imagined. Three storeys of Georgian architecture, set back from the road behind wrought-iron gates. The grounds were immaculate, with manicured gardens and a gravel drive that crunched beneath our tyres as we pulled up.

The front door was already open, and a uniformed officer stood in the entrance. The body was in the library, we were told. The chef, Eleanor Hartwick, had found it and called it in.

The library was exactly what you'd expect in a house like this: floor-to-ceiling bookshelves, a fireplace with a marble mantelpiece, and leather furniture arranged for comfort. Lord Ashworth sat in his chair like a grotesque parody of a man at rest. The letter opener was still in his chest.

Leslie moved closer, studying the scene without touching anything. I could see her mind working, cataloguing details.

"Time of death?" she asked the pathologist, who'd arrived just before us.

"Sometime between midnight and four in the morning, I'd say. The body temperature suggests closer to the earlier end. The wound is deep—whoever did this had strength and determination."

I noticed the open window behind the chair. That could be significant. I mentioned it to Leslie, who nodded approvingly.

"Good observation. The killer might have escaped that way, or wanted us to think they did. Note it down."

We spent the next hour interviewing the staff. Eleanor Hartwick was composed but clearly shaken. The butler, a man named Graves, seemed almost unmoved by the death of his employer. The housemaid, a young woman named Sarah, was tearful and anxious. The gardener hadn't been on the premises.

By the time we left Thornfield Manor that morning, I knew that this case was going to consume my life. And I didn't mind one bit.

Chapter 33: Behind Closed Doors [Thomas Graves, Butler]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 5 May 2026

I've been employed at Thornfield Manor for thirty-seven years, and I've learned that discretion is the cornerstone of service. You see things in a great house that polite society would prefer to ignore. You learn to hold your tongue, to maintain your composure, and to never, ever speak of what happens behind closed doors.

But now, with Lord Ashworth dead, murdered in his own library, I found myself facing a young detective sergeant with intelligent eyes who clearly expected me to share everything I knew.

"How long had you worked for Lord Ashworth?" he asked.

"Thirty-seven years, sir."

"And in all that time, did he ever mention any threats? Anyone who might wish him harm?"

I considered this carefully. Lord Ashworth had made enemies the way other men made friends. His business dealings had been ruthless, his personal relationships even more so. His first wife had left him, taking nothing but the clothes on her back. His second marriage had lasted only three years. His children barely spoke to him.

But I couldn't say these things to the police. It would be disloyal, even now, even with him dead.

"Lord Ashworth was a man of strong opinions," I said carefully. "But I'm not aware of any specific threats."

This was not entirely true. Just last week, I'd overheard him on the telephone with someone, his voice raised in anger. "If you come here again, I'll have you arrested," he'd said. "You're not welcome at Thornfield, and you never will be."

I didn't know who he'd been speaking to. It could have been anyone. His son, perhaps, or one of his business associates. But I kept this to myself.

The detective seemed to sense my reticence. He exchanged a look with his superior, DCI Smith, and I knew they didn't believe I was telling them everything. But they couldn't force me to speak, and I had my principles.

After they left, I returned to my duties. The house had to be maintained, even in the wake of tragedy. The silver needed polishing, the carpets needed brushing, and the kitchen would need to be set in order now that Eleanor was too distressed to work.

As I moved through the familiar corridors of Thornfield Manor, I thought about the secrets this house contained. Lord Ashworth had been a collector of secrets—other people's secrets, which he used as leverage in his business dealings. He'd kept detailed records in his study, locked away in a safe behind a portrait of his grandfather.

I wondered if those secrets had killed him. I suspected they had. But I would never tell the police. That was not my place.

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DCI Smith investigates the murder of Lord Ashworth with meticulous attention to detail, uncovering clues that point to a possible motive involving a woman with a grudge.
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