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Chapter 11: The Prophecy Unbound-The Broken Journey

ur-unstable-fangirl42 Dystopian 11 Feb 2026

“Jacob, I’m scared,” Kate whispered.

Jacob squeezed his wife’s hand. “I know. I am too.”

Their two‑week‑old son cooed softly, and Kate held him tighter against her chest.

Jacob knew the Superiors were coming. He could feel them closing in. He and Kate had managed to stay ahead of them for a while, but the Superiors were faster, tireless, relentless. Jacob wrapped his arms around Kate, knowing this would be their last embrace.

He shut his eyes. Memories flickered through his mind—his years living among the Superiors, obeying their every command; the day he married Kate; the birth of their first son, now seven, whom they had been forced to leave behind. And then the dream—the reason they were here at all.

He had dreamt of a place far beyond Superior territory, a place where humans lived freely and peacefully. He didn’t know how he knew it existed, only that he did. When he told Kate, she had doubted him—until she dreamt it too. That was when they fled.

But now, with the Superiors nearly upon them, Jacob wondered if he had believed the dream simply because he needed it to be true. Instead, he had led his family into a trap. He drew a long breath and opened his eyes. What he saw sparked an idea.

“Kate,” he said, gripping her shoulders, “we have to hide the baby.”

Kate stared at him, as though she hadn’t heard correctly. “What? Where?”

“There.” Jacob turned her and pointed.

About thirty feet away stood a tree with a hollow just large enough for a baby. They hurried to it. Inside was an abandoned nest—likely a raccoon’s.

“Nice and cozy,” Jacob murmured, taking their son.

“Wait—before you put him in…” Kate slipped off her backpack and rummaged through it. She pulled out a small piece of paper and a pen, scribbled a note, folded it, and tucked it into the baby’s blanket.

“What’s that?” Jacob asked.

“It’s for whoever finds him. His name, where he’s from, what happened to us… and to take good care of him.” Her voice trembled.

“His name? But we never named him.” Jacob looked at her, puzzled.

She smiled faintly. “I just did.”

“Oh?”

“Amos.”

Jacob looked down at his sleeping son. “Amos. Couldn’t be more perfect.”

He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small rectangular photograph—himself, Kate, and their first son. He tucked it beside the note.

“You and your A’s,” Jacob said, glancing at Kate. She let out a soft laugh, though a tear slid down her cheek.

They both kissed little Amos goodbye. Jacob placed him gently inside the hollow tree. Then he wrapped an arm around Kate, and together they walked back the way they had come. They hadn’t gone far when the brush rustled and machinery whirred. They stopped. This was it.

Jacob looked into Kate’s eyes. “I love you, Kate.”

“I love you, Jacob.”

They kissed, and Jacob knew there was no other way he would rather die. They pulled apart just as three Superiors emerged from the right.

The leader smiled. “Found you.”

All three raised their pistols. Kate buried her face in Jacob’s chest. He held her close, shifting to shield her with his body.

The leader laughed—and they fired.

Chapter 22: The Prophecy Unbound-The Broken Journey-(Technically Chapter 1)

ur-unstable-fangirl42 Dystopian 26 Feb 2026

The white room smelled like blood and bleach.

Ajax was twelve when he took the Test. The walls were padded—not for safety, but for silence. Every sound was absorbed: screams, bones breaking, minds snapping under pressure. The Superiors called it “controlled observation.” The children called it hell.

Everything had been sterile. The walls. The lights. The cold metal beneath his feet. Even the instructors, wrapped in synthetic calm, wore white. It made the blood easier to see.

He wasn’t the smartest at first. That had been Mara—the girl with silver eyes and steady fingers. She’d been like an older sister t him.

Challenge 1 tested reaction speed. Challenge 2: spatial awareness. Challenge 3… broke most of them.

He remembered Mara’s jaw tightening as her partner failed to reassemble a kinetic latch in time. She didn’t cry. Didn’t flinch. She stepped over the twitching body and moved on. Ajax admired her, and would spend hours of the night talking to her... until she was gone.

Fear never left. It lived in your chest like a second heart. You learned to breathe around it.

Ajax survived—not by strength or logic alone. He was wired differently, the Superiors said. “Mechanically fluent.” His mind understood machines the way others understood language. He didn’t sleep for three days after. His hands trembled long after the tests stopped.

Out of sixty-three candidates, four survived.

Four minds that thought in shapes, sounds, and systems.

Seven years later, only one remained.

“Ajax Kaelith.”

The voice cut through memory.

He blinked. His hands hovered over the Superior he’d been building—a sleek silver model, cranial plate flipped open like a toolbox. Wires curled from its core, twitching faintly.

“Ajax Kaelith. Report to the Observation Deck. Five minutes until the Test resumes.”

He didn’t move.

The memory wasn’t of the Test.

It was of her.

Lira.

Three months since she died.

Curly brown hair tied in a messy knot. Sharp brown eyes. Her voice rough from dry air, but when she laughed—truly laughed—it broke something open inside him.

She was a contestant. He wasn’t supposed to care. But she stood out. Not just brilliant—good. She helped others even when it cost her.

He knew the moment it would.

Challenge 4 was chaos—a collapsing floor maze with shifting magnetic pulses. Most panicked. Some froze. Lira moved fast, thinking faster. She was nearly at the exit when the boy behind her—maybe thirteen—slipped.

Ajax saw her hesitate on the monitor.

“No,” he’d whispered. “Don’t—”

But she turned back.

She hauled the boy over her shoulder, teeth clenched, dragging him across falling panels and through collapsing steel.

She almost made it.

The wall trap timed out. A jagged slab snapped shut.

It crushed her left side.

Her eyes went wide. She shoved the boy forward. He made it.

She didn’t.

No scream.

Only the way she looked at the camera—straight at him—as the light left her eyes.

Termination logged: Candidate 12-Kappa.

He’d watched it a hundred times.

It never stopped.

He shut the machine’s core, leaving steps unfinished—something he never did—and walked to the Observation Deck.

The room was cold, lined with towering screens showing each candidate’s view. Kids aged seven to fifteen ran, crawled, screamed, bled—dots in a system.

Ajax monitored breath rate. Heart spikes. Reaction times.

One boy—too slow. Gone.

Error: Candidate 10-Delta: Terminated.

A girl caught his attention. She stayed low, scanning, using the environment. Brown hair. Wide eyes—like Lira’s.

She cleared the first trap. Then the second.

He wanted her to live.

At the wall climb, her foot slipped. A blade caught her hip. She screamed but kept climbing.

Almost there.

She reached the top, limped forward—missed the wire.

The explosion was silent.

Her body folded backward.

Screen black.

Error: Candidate 47-Delta: Terminated.

He stared too long.

Why didn’t you save me?

He shook the thought away.

That wasn’t her.

Twenty-one left.

He watched the rest without feeling.

Back in the Assembly Ward, he sealed the neural grid, locked the cranial plate, and initiated the boot sequence.

“Designation complete,” the Superior said.

He tilted the table upright. It stepped forward, joining the line of newborn Superiors exiting the chamber.

He left without speaking. Like usual.

Outside, the city buzzed with artificial life. Steel towers pierced the clouds. Sky-bridges glowed. Drones patrolled. Screens flooded the streets in sterile blue light.

No plants. No birds. Only circuits and concrete.

People walked in silence, most shadowed by a Superior.

His apartment sat thirty-seven stories up in Tower 9. One room. One table. One bed. Ordered. Predictable.

The largest space belonged to Ezio’s cage—his Golden Eagle.

Dinner was protein paste and a dried bar. A Superior newsfeed looped progress reports and efficiency scores. Never faces. Never names.

He turned it off.

This was “winning.”

He hadn’t spoken to another human in three days. His only friend, Dominic—a fellow Builder—had vanished a week ago. No warning, just gone.

He slept in his clothes.

His mind replayed the girl’s death. Then Lira’s laugh—wild, free.

She’d known the weight of machinery.

She just refused to carry it.

-

Wind brushed his face.

Real wind.

Ajax took a deep breath. The air smelled like rain, grass, and something else... freedom.

He stood barefoot on a cliff overlooking a green valley. Trees swayed. Birds wheeled overhead. A snow-capped mountain rose beyond.

At the valley floor was a town. Children laughed. No Superiors.

“Ajax.”

Warm. Human.

A woman stood in the treeline in a green dress.

“You found it,” she said.

“Found what?”

“Where you belong.”

“We’ve been waiting.”

“I don’t understand.”

“You know how to find us.”

She faded into shadow.

Ajax stepped toward her. “How do I escape the Superiors?”

“You know the way.”

The ground rumbled. Fire tore through the sky.

Superiors descended, red eyes burning. The earth cracked. More crawled upward.

Flames engulfed him. A Superior seized his arm.

“No!” Ajax screamed, trying to yank out of its iron grip.

Fire became static.

The trees vanished.

He stood in a ruined Control Room. Screens cracked. The faces of dead children flickered.

Lira ran through an old Test chamber.

She turned.

“Why didn’t you save me?”

Blood trickled from her mouth.

“Why didn’t you stop them?”

He tried to reach her—

His hands were metal.

Silver fingers. Hissing joints.

In the glass, his face was gone.

Only a mask.

-

He woke gasping, drenched in sweat.

Hands shaking. He looked down.

Flesh.

Still human.

Why didn’t you stop them?

He sat on the edge of the bed, adrenaline pumping through his veins.

At the sink, he stared at the mirror.

Too pale. Too hollow. Too aware.

That wasn’t just a dream.

The air felt electric.

Something was shifting.

A crack in the pattern.

For years, he had followed orders. Survived. Built the machines that killed people like her.

Now—

He wasn’t sure he could keep doing it.

Chapter 33: The Prophecy Unbound-The Broken Journey-Chapter 2

ur-unstable-fangirl42 Dystopian 15 Oct 2026

Ajax couldn’t shake the images from his dream. What was that mysterious place he had seen? Where were the Superiors, and what significance did they hold?

As he dressed, his mind wandered, and he moved through his morning routine like a ghost. When he fed Ezio, the eagle nearly caught his finger in its sharp beak. Still distracted, Ajax followed his usual path to work, moving more out of habit than purpose.

The assembly ward was a long, dark room with concrete walls and a high ceiling. Ledges stretched along the walls, where Superiors patrolled and watched the builders below. Ajax couldn’t go anywhere in the City without at least three Superiors monitoring the area.

Each builder’s workstation measured ten feet square, with four feet between stations. Small lights illuminated their tables, and medic buttons stood ready for emergencies. Every station held the tools necessary for metalworking: welders, grinders, cutting tools, forges, quench tanks, hammers, magnetic anvils, lasers, chisels, lathes, and milling machines.

Safety was essential. Builders were rare and valuable, and every tool could be deadly in careless hands. They wore advanced welding helmets, magnetic shielding bands, and fireproof gloves. A sturdy metal collar around each builder’s neck could deploy a protective bodysuit at the press of a red button, covering their arms, torso, and legs to the knees. Once their work was finished, another press retracted it.

Ajax stood at his table, surrounded by tools and parts. Above him, a Superior’s footsteps echoed along the ledge as its gaze swept over the workers.

He gathered the components for a core reactor, the first part of every Superior, and began building. His hands moved with practiced precision, guided by a mind that saw possibilities others missed.

After seven years of constructing Superiors, the work had become instinctive. Time faded as he settled into his familiar rhythm - until a deafening crash shattered the silence, followed by an explosion.

Every builder turned toward the far side of the room.

Flames flickered from the half-finished body of a Superior. Beside it stood a pale, skinny boy who looked no older than fourteen, his tousled blond hair falling into his eyes. He clutched his right hand against his chest. A nasty burn was already bubbling across his palm.

The boy stared at the Superiors on the ledge, trembling with terror.

Something in his expression struck Ajax deeply, unburying memories of his own mistakes. Phantom pain stirred through the scars across his chest and back.

The Superiors tolerated no errors. Mistakes meant punishment.

Two seized the boy’s arms and stretched them apart, leaving him exposed. He cried out.

“No, please! I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to!”

A third Superior uncoiled the leather whip at its side.

“Gabriel Mailen,” it announced. “An error has been recorded at your station. Your punishment is ten lashes. Five on the front and five on the back.”

Tears streamed down Gabriel’s face as the whip rose.

Ajax looked away as he crack of the whip and Gabriel’s screams echoed through the ward. Around him, builders watched numbly, closed their eyes, or bowed their heads.

One boy stood rigid at his station, fists clenched and tears running down his cheeks. He had Gabriel’s pale skin and blond hair, though he was several years older. His eyes burned with anger and hatred, but he remained where he was.

Gabriel’s brother, Ajax assumed.

When the punishment finally ended, two Superiors still held Gabriel upright. His legs trembled, his head hung forward, and his shirt was shredded and bloody. They released him, and he crumpled to the floor.

“Make another mistake, and your punishment will be worse,” the Superior with the whip warned. He turned toward the other builders.

“No mistakes, or you will end up like this skinny boy.”

“Yes, sir!” the builders shouted in unison.

The Superior surveyed them before gesturing toward Gabriel. “Take care of this.”

Then he left.

The older boy rushed forward. “Gib!”

Ajax and several other builders hurried to Gabriel’s side. Ajax carefully inspected his wounds while another builder pressed the medic button.

The older boy sniffled. “I’m so sorry, brother. I’m so sorry you were like me.”

Gabriel opened his eyes. “Eason?”

“I’m here, Gib.”

“I didn’t mean to. I don’t know what happened! I tried—” Gabriel broke down.

“I know. It’s okay. You’ll be okay.” Eason brushed the sweat-soaked hair from his brother’s forehead.

As the other builders returned to their stations, Ajax heard Gabriel whisper, “I hate this place.”

The walk back to his table felt endless. The hatred in Eason’s eyes was not new. Ajax recognized it in the other builders, too. Every time they looked at a Superior, anger flickered across their faces. Their hunched shoulders and monotonous movements revealed the same hollowness Ajax had carried for years without truly noticing.

He watched as the med-Superiors treated Gabriel and carried him to the med-bay. Eason waited until they had left before returning to his station.

Then he spotted the Superior who had whipped his brother.

His expression hardened. Slowly, his hand closed around a pair of wire cutters.

Ajax understood immediately.

“Eason,” he murmured.

Eason glanced at him. Ajax gave the smallest shake of his head.

For a moment, Eason glared at him. Then the anger in his face crumbled into pain and defeat, and his hand fell to his side.

Ajax exhaled in relief. He couldn’t bear to watch Eason suffer an even worse fate than Gabriel.

Eventually, the builders returned to their routines. No one spoke. No one interacted. They simply worked, assembling Superiors as though nothing had happened.

Ajax finished the reactor core and set it aside. He knew the design of every Superior by heart. Next came the physical frame.

He took an empty rolling cart used to transport Superior parts and quietly left the assembly ward.

The narrow corridor stretched ahead, lined with closed wooden doors and flickering lights. He pushed the cart forward, each step accompanied by the soft, repetitive squeak of its wheels. Shadows twisted across the walls as Ajax moved. The only sound was the cart's lonely protest. Ajax felt no fear. He had walked this route a thousand times.

At the next corner, he nearly collided with two Superiors.

He stopped abruptly, lowered his gaze to the cart, and waited, heart pounding. Their eyes searched him for a moment before they nodded slightly and continued down the hall.

Ajax released his breath.

Not everyone was so lucky.

He continued toward a pair of large wooden doors marked PARTS WARD - AUTHORIZED PERSONNEL ONLY.

Inside, darkness swallowed him until he found the switch. Cold white light flooded the room, making him flinch as his eyes adjusted.

The air smelled of oil and metal. Shelves lined the walls, holding smaller Superior components - arms, legs, and heads - while larger torsos hung from ceiling hooks. Sheets of metal were suspended overhead, organized by type, including the newest alloy. At the room’s center stood shelves packed with boxes of wires, chips, sockets, joints, synthetic muscle fibers, and countless other components.

Everything he needed was here.

Ajax loaded the cart, arranging each part carefully to prevent damage during transport. His mind naturally organized everything into patterns and puzzles. It was one reason he had become a Builder.

The cart was significantly heavier now, though Ajax hardly noticed. After building Superiors and working with heavy equipment for the last seven years, he had built up a lot of muscle and was incredibly strong. Stronger than average.

As he pushed the cart back through the corridor, he noticed a door on the left standing slightly ajar. It had been closed earlier. Ajax rarely missed details like that.

From inside came the urgent, robotic voices of Superiors.

Half of him urged him to keep moving. The other half insisted on listening.

Curiosity won.

He stopped outside the door, keeping silent.

“…couldn’t find him. They failed their mission and self-destructed,” one Superior said.

“How could they not find him? Humans are slow. They can’t hide from us.”

“We don’t know what happened. The human escaped, our Trackers failed to locate him and self-destructed, and he’s still on the run.”

“Perhaps a wild animal killed him,” a third voice suggested.

“Possible, but unlikely. A pistol is also missing from our stores, along with two magazines of ammunition. He’s armed.”

Another voice growled.

“The humans must not discover the truth. If anyone asks, Dominic Jerin was taken to a classified facility for violating the Builder code.”

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