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Chapter 11: 12 Voices [Eleanor Hartwick]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 4 May 2026

The morning light filtered through the kitchen window of Thornfield Manor, casting long shadows across the marble countertops. I'd been the head chef here for nearly twenty years, and I knew every corner of this grand old house better than I knew my own reflection. But nothing could have prepared me for what I found that Tuesday morning in October.

I arrived at half past six, as I always did, to prepare breakfast for the household. The kitchen was my domain, and I took pride in the soufflés that rose perfectly every time and the fresh bread that filled the corridors with warmth. That morning, I'd planned something special: Lord Ashworth's favourite kedgeree, with fresh herbs from the garden.

The back door was unlocked, which struck me as odd. Lord Ashworth was meticulous about security, especially after the incident with the jewellery three years ago. I pushed it open carefully, listening for any sound from the house. Nothing but the grandfather clock in the hall, ticking away the seconds.

I made my way through the servants' corridor, my footsteps echoing on the stone floor. The library was on my route to the study where I sometimes left notes about special dietary requirements. As I passed the heavy oak door, something made me stop. It was slightly ajar, and I noticed a strange smell—something metallic and wrong.

I pushed the door open.

Lord Ashworth was slumped in his leather chair, his head tilted back. At first, I thought he was sleeping, but then I saw the letter opener protruding from his chest, the ornate handle catching the early morning light. His silk dressing gown was dark with blood, and his face had taken on a waxy, pale quality that made my stomach lurch.

I didn't scream. I'm not the screaming type. Instead, I stood there, my hand still on the doorframe, and felt the world tilt slightly beneath my feet. My mind registered details with strange clarity: the way his fingers hung limply over the armrest, the half-finished glass of brandy on the side table, the open window behind his chair.

Then I moved. My training kicked in, and I reached for the telephone in the hall with shaking hands. The police. I needed to call the police. My voice sounded strange and distant as I gave the operator the details, and I found myself sitting on the bottom step of the grand staircase, still in my coat, waiting for the sirens I could hear approaching in the distance.

Twenty years of service, and I'd never imagined ending it like this. Lord Ashworth had been difficult, certainly—demanding and often cruel in his cutting remarks—but he hadn't deserved this. No one deserved this.

As the first police car pulled up the long gravel drive, I realized that everything had changed. The comfortable routine of Thornfield Manor was shattered, and whatever came next would be far darker than anything these old walls had witnessed in their three-hundred-year history.

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