Chapters

Chapter 11: The scent next door

Thestolensoul Mystery / Thriller 9 May 2026

Marine was returning back to her home from the usual route. Suddenly, she smelled an awful scent coming from the newly opened shop.

Chapter 22: Idk what to name it

Queen-neef13 Literary / Fiction 12 May 2026

Marine froze halfway up the cracked sidewalk.


“Marine!”


Her mama’s voice drifted across the parking lot, sharp and worried. The evening air carried it strangely, stretching the syllables like the wind didn’t want to let them go.


Marine glanced back toward the car.


Her mama stood beside the gas pump, one hand shielding her eyes from the sinking sun. “Don’t wander off!”


“I’m just looking!” Marine called back.


Then the smell hit again.


Not burnt donuts.


Not grease.


Not even rotten milk.


It smelled… wrong.


Like wet dirt mixed with metal and something sour underneath. The kind of smell that made your stomach tighten before your brain understood why.


Marine turned slowly toward the donut shop.


The flickering sign buzzed overhead.


HOT DONUTS — OPEN 24 HOURS


Only three letters still worked consistently. The rest blinked on and off like tired fireflies.


The windows were fogged from the inside.


But the parking lot was empty.


No cars.


No customers.


No lights except a faint yellow glow near the kitchen.


Marine took one careful step closer.


Then another.


The smell grew stronger.


A buzzing noise came from somewhere behind the building.


Not electrical buzzing.


Flies.


A LOT of flies.


Marine swallowed.


Okay. That was definitely not normal donut-shop behavior.


She reached for the door handle.


Before she could touch it—


THUMP.


Something hit the inside of the door.


Marine jumped back so hard her shoe scraped against the pavement.


The glass trembled slightly.


Then everything went still.


Her heart hammered.


“Marine!” her mama yelled again, closer this time. “Get back here right now!”


Marine stared at the fogged window.


For one second, she thought she saw a shape move behind the glass.


Tall.


Too tall.


And then, slowly, words appeared in the condensation.


Not written.


Pressed from the other side.


RUN.

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todiewasanarty
Mystery / Thriller
12 May 2026
Marine's encounter with a mysterious donut shop leaves her shaken and questioning her own reality.
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