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Chapter 11: 12 Voices [Eleanor Hartwick]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 2 days ago

The morning light filtered through the kitchen window of Thornfield Manor, casting long shadows across the marble countertops. I'd been the head chef here for nearly twenty years, and I knew every corner of this grand old house better than I knew my own reflection. But nothing could have prepared me for what I found that Tuesday morning in October.

I arrived at half past six, as I always did, to prepare breakfast for the household. The kitchen was my domain, and I took pride in the soufflés that rose perfectly every time and the fresh bread that filled the corridors with warmth. That morning, I'd planned something special: Lord Ashworth's favourite kedgeree, with fresh herbs from the garden.

The back door was unlocked, which struck me as odd. Lord Ashworth was meticulous about security, especially after the incident with the jewellery three years ago. I pushed it open carefully, listening for any sound from the house. Nothing but the grandfather clock in the hall, ticking away the seconds.

I made my way through the servants' corridor, my footsteps echoing on the stone floor. The library was on my route to the study where I sometimes left notes about special dietary requirements. As I passed the heavy oak door, something made me stop. It was slightly ajar, and I noticed a strange smell—something metallic and wrong.

I pushed the door open.

Lord Ashworth was slumped in his leather chair, his head tilted back. At first, I thought he was sleeping, but then I saw the letter opener protruding from his chest, the ornate handle catching the early morning light. His silk dressing gown was dark with blood, and his face had taken on a waxy, pale quality that made my stomach lurch.

I didn't scream. I'm not the screaming type. Instead, I stood there, my hand still on the doorframe, and felt the world tilt slightly beneath my feet. My mind registered details with strange clarity: the way his fingers hung limply over the armrest, the half-finished glass of brandy on the side table, the open window behind his chair.

Then I moved. My training kicked in, and I reached for the telephone in the hall with shaking hands. The police. I needed to call the police. My voice sounded strange and distant as I gave the operator the details, and I found myself sitting on the bottom step of the grand staircase, still in my coat, waiting for the sirens I could hear approaching in the distance.

Twenty years of service, and I'd never imagined ending it like this. Lord Ashworth had been difficult, certainly—demanding and often cruel in his cutting remarks—but he hadn't deserved this. No one deserved this.

As the first police car pulled up the long gravel drive, I realized that everything had changed. The comfortable routine of Thornfield Manor was shattered, and whatever came next would be far darker than anything these old walls had witnessed in their three-hundred-year history.

Chapter 22: A Detective Awakens [Detective Sergeant Jacob Archer]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 18 hours ago

The call came through at six fifty-two on a Tuesday morning, and I was still halfway through my first coffee at the station. At twenty-three, I was the youngest detective sergeant in the Devon and Cornwall Police, and I still got the early shifts that nobody else wanted. I didn't mind. I'd wanted to be a detective since I was twelve years old, and I wasn't about to complain about early mornings.

"Suspicious death at Thornfield Manor," my supervisor, DCI Leslie Smith, said as she appeared at my desk with her own coffee. She was in her mid-thirties, with sharp eyes that missed nothing and a reputation for closing cases that other officers had written off. "Looks like murder. You're with me."

I grabbed my jacket and followed her to the car, my heart already racing. This was my third month as a detective, and I'd only worked property crimes and petty theft before. A murder at one of the county's most prestigious estates would be significant.

The drive took twenty minutes, and Leslie filled me in on what we knew. The victim was Lord Ashworth, a seventy-two-year-old retired businessman with a reputation for being difficult. The house staff had discovered the body. No signs of forced entry, which suggested the killer knew how to access the house.

"Keep your eyes open," Leslie said as she navigated the winding country roads. "Everything means something. The smallest detail could be what breaks the case."

Thornfield Manor was every bit as impressive as I'd imagined. Three storeys of Georgian architecture, set back from the road behind wrought-iron gates. The grounds were immaculate, with manicured gardens and a gravel drive that crunched beneath our tyres as we pulled up.

The front door was already open, and a uniformed officer stood in the entrance. The body was in the library, we were told. The chef, Eleanor Hartwick, had found it and called it in.

The library was exactly what you'd expect in a house like this: floor-to-ceiling bookshelves, a fireplace with a marble mantelpiece, and leather furniture arranged for comfort. Lord Ashworth sat in his chair like a grotesque parody of a man at rest. The letter opener was still in his chest.

Leslie moved closer, studying the scene without touching anything. I could see her mind working, cataloguing details.

"Time of death?" she asked the pathologist, who'd arrived just before us.

"Sometime between midnight and four in the morning, I'd say. The body temperature suggests closer to the earlier end. The wound is deep—whoever did this had strength and determination."

I noticed the open window behind the chair. That could be significant. I mentioned it to Leslie, who nodded approvingly.

"Good observation. The killer might have escaped that way, or wanted us to think they did. Note it down."

We spent the next hour interviewing the staff. Eleanor Hartwick was composed but clearly shaken. The butler, a man named Graves, seemed almost unmoved by the death of his employer. The housemaid, a young woman named Sarah, was tearful and anxious. The gardener hadn't been on the premises.

By the time we left Thornfield Manor that morning, I knew that this case was going to consume my life. And I didn't mind one bit.

Chapter 33: Behind Closed Doors [Thomas Graves, Butler]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 15 hours ago

I've been employed at Thornfield Manor for thirty-seven years, and I've learned that discretion is the cornerstone of service. You see things in a great house that polite society would prefer to ignore. You learn to hold your tongue, to maintain your composure, and to never, ever speak of what happens behind closed doors.

But now, with Lord Ashworth dead, murdered in his own library, I found myself facing a young detective sergeant with intelligent eyes who clearly expected me to share everything I knew.

"How long had you worked for Lord Ashworth?" he asked.

"Thirty-seven years, sir."

"And in all that time, did he ever mention any threats? Anyone who might wish him harm?"

I considered this carefully. Lord Ashworth had made enemies the way other men made friends. His business dealings had been ruthless, his personal relationships even more so. His first wife had left him, taking nothing but the clothes on her back. His second marriage had lasted only three years. His children barely spoke to him.

But I couldn't say these things to the police. It would be disloyal, even now, even with him dead.

"Lord Ashworth was a man of strong opinions," I said carefully. "But I'm not aware of any specific threats."

This was not entirely true. Just last week, I'd overheard him on the telephone with someone, his voice raised in anger. "If you come here again, I'll have you arrested," he'd said. "You're not welcome at Thornfield, and you never will be."

I didn't know who he'd been speaking to. It could have been anyone. His son, perhaps, or one of his business associates. But I kept this to myself.

The detective seemed to sense my reticence. He exchanged a look with his superior, DCI Smith, and I knew they didn't believe I was telling them everything. But they couldn't force me to speak, and I had my principles.

After they left, I returned to my duties. The house had to be maintained, even in the wake of tragedy. The silver needed polishing, the carpets needed brushing, and the kitchen would need to be set in order now that Eleanor was too distressed to work.

As I moved through the familiar corridors of Thornfield Manor, I thought about the secrets this house contained. Lord Ashworth had been a collector of secrets—other people's secrets, which he used as leverage in his business dealings. He'd kept detailed records in his study, locked away in a safe behind a portrait of his grandfather.

I wondered if those secrets had killed him. I suspected they had. But I would never tell the police. That was not my place.

Chapter 44: Precision and Intent [Detective Chief Inspector Leslie Smith]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 11 hours ago

By Wednesday morning, we had the preliminary autopsy results. The letter opener had punctured Lord Ashworth's heart cleanly. Death would have been relatively quick, perhaps a minute or two. The killer knew what they were doing, or they were very lucky.

I was inclined to think it was the former. This wasn't a crime of passion. There was too much control, too much precision. Someone had walked into that library, confronted Lord Ashworth, and killed him with deliberate intent.

My team had begun the process of interviewing everyone who had access to the house. There were seven staff members, plus Lord Ashworth's two adult children, his ex-wife, and several business associates. The open window suggested the killer might have escaped that way, but the ground beneath it showed no signs of disturbance. No broken branches, no footprints, nothing.

I was beginning to suspect the open window was a red herring.

Jacob had been thorough in his initial interviews, and I could see the makings of a good detective in him. He had instinct, that crucial element that couldn't be taught. He'd picked up on the butler's evasiveness immediately, which told me there was more to Graves than he was saying.

"Pull his background," I told Jacob. "And get me everything on Lord Ashworth's business dealings. If someone killed him, there's usually a motive. Money, revenge, or fear. Find out which one it is."

The second day of an investigation is crucial. The trail is still warm, but the shock is beginning to wear off, and people start thinking about what they should have said, what they should have hidden. I'd learned to move quickly, to press hard while the pieces were still loose.

I returned to Thornfield Manor myself on Wednesday afternoon. Eleanor Hartwick was back in the kitchen, preparing a simple supper for the remaining household staff. She looked exhausted.

"How are you holding up?" I asked, sitting at the kitchen table.

"As well as can be expected, ma'am. It's been a difficult time."

"I imagine it has. You've been here a long time."

"Twenty years."

"And in all that time, did Lord Ashworth have any particular enemies? Anyone who visited frequently, or anyone he argued with?"

Eleanor hesitated. She was a careful woman, I could tell. Someone who weighed her words before speaking.

"There was a woman," she said finally. "She came to the house about six months ago. The first time, Lord Ashworth seemed pleased to see her. But the last few visits, they argued. Quite loudly. I heard them through the study door."

"Did you ever hear what they argued about?"

"Something about money, I think. And betrayal. The woman said he'd ruined her life, and he owed her. He told her to leave and never come back."

This was exactly the sort of detail that could break a case wide open. "Do you know her name?"

"I'm sorry, ma'am. I never heard it."

I made a note of this. A woman with a grudge against Lord Ashworth. Someone he'd wronged, apparently. This was a solid lead.

As I drove back to the station, I thought about the nature of murder. It was almost always personal. The killer had stood close enough to Lord Ashworth to use the letter opener, close enough to see his face as the life drained from his eyes. That took nerve, or desperation, or both.

I was going to find whoever had done this. It was what I did best.

Chapter 55: Perfume and Secrets [Sarah Mitchell, Housemaid]

Maejune23 Mystery / Thriller 11 hours ago

I'd been working at Thornfield Manor for only eight months, and I was still learning the routines and the rules. The house was grand and intimidating, and most of the staff barely acknowledged my existence. But I was grateful for the job. My family needed the money, and work was work.

Finding Lord Ashworth dead had terrified me. I'd never seen a dead body before, never seen blood like that. When the police came, I'd cried, not so much from grief—I barely knew Lord Ashworth—but from shock.

But now, as I went about my duties, dusting and tidying while trying not to think about the library, I began to notice things. Small things that might not mean anything, but which nagged at me nonetheless.

The first was the key. Lord Ashworth's study was always locked, and he kept the key on a chain around his neck. But on the morning of his death, the study door was slightly ajar, and I could see that his desk had been disturbed. Papers were scattered across the surface, as if someone had been searching for something.

The second thing was the smell. I'd noticed it when I was tidying the upstairs corridor on Tuesday morning, before Eleanor had found the body. A woman's perfume, something expensive and floral. It was strongest near Lord Ashworth's bedroom, but I'd also caught a whiff of it near the library door.

The third thing was the visitor. On Monday evening, I'd seen a woman leaving through the back gate. She was tall, with dark hair, and she'd looked upset. I'd wondered at the time if she was one of Lord Ashworth's business associates, but something about the way she'd moved, the way she'd glanced back at the house, suggested something more personal.

I didn't know if any of this was important. I didn't even know if I should mention it to the police. But when Detective Sergeant Archer came back to the house on Wednesday to interview the staff again, I found myself telling him about the woman I'd seen.

"What did she look like?" he asked, his notebook ready.

"Tall," I said. "Dark hair, maybe shoulder-length. She was wearing a blue coat, I think. And she looked angry when she left."

"Did you see her face clearly?"

"Not really. She was walking away from me."

"But you're certain it was Monday evening?"

"Yes, sir. I remember because I was supposed to finish early, but Eleanor asked me to help with the dinner preparations, so I was still here."

Detective Sergeant Archer made notes, and I could see him thinking, processing this information. He was young, younger than I'd expected a detective to be, but he had an intensity about him that made me take him seriously.

"Thank you," he said. "This is helpful. If you see this woman again, or if you remember anything else, please get in touch with us immediately."

After he left, I felt both relieved and anxious. I'd done the right thing by telling him, hadn't I? But what if the woman was someone important, someone connected to Lord Ashworth's family? What if my information caused problems for her?

I tried not to think about it as I went back to my work, but the thought lingered. In a house full of secrets, even the smallest piece of information could be dangerous.

Chapter 66: The Heir [Richard Ashworth]

Maejune23 Mystery / Thriller 10 hours ago

My father and I hadn't spoken in three years. The last conversation we'd had ended with him telling me he was ashamed to call me his son, and me telling him I was ashamed to call him my father. It was the sort of thing you say in anger, the sort of thing you regret but never quite manage to apologize for.

Now he was dead, and I would never get the chance to make things right.

I'd been living in London, working as a solicitor, trying to build a life that had nothing to do with my father's shadow. He'd wanted me to take over his business interests, to become a ruthless operator like himself. But I'd wanted something different. I'd wanted to be good at something without compromising my integrity.

My father had found this amusing and pathetic in equal measure.

When the police called to inform me of his death, I'd felt a strange mixture of emotions. Shock, certainly. Sadness, even though I'd spent years convincing myself I didn't care about him anymore. And underneath it all, a guilty sense of relief. He was gone, and I was free.

Detective Chief Inspector Smith wanted to interview me at my London flat on Wednesday afternoon. She was professional and courteous, but I could sense the suspicion beneath her politeness. I was the son, the heir, the person who stood to inherit a significant fortune.

"I was in London," I told her. "I had dinner with colleagues on Monday evening, and I was in the office all day Tuesday. You can verify this."

"I'm sure we can. But I have to ask—when did you last see your father?"

"Three years ago. We had a disagreement, and we didn't reconcile."

"What was the disagreement about?"

I hesitated. It seemed disloyal to speak ill of the dead, even when the dead had been unkind to me. But the detective was waiting, her pen poised over her notebook.

"He wanted me to work in the family business. I wanted to pursue law. He felt I was wasting my potential and my education. He said I was a disappointment."

"That must have been difficult."

"It was. But I'd made my peace with it. I was building my own life."

"And yet you're his heir, aren't you? You stand to inherit Thornfield Manor and a considerable amount of money."

"Yes."

"Did you know that?"

"My solicitor mentioned it when I turned twenty-one. My father's will was a matter of record."

The detective made a note. I could see her mind working, fitting pieces together. I wanted to tell her that I hadn't killed my father, that I'd been three hundred miles away when it happened, that I had no motive beyond a son's complicated feelings toward a difficult parent.

But I said nothing. I waited for her questions, and I answered them truthfully. And when she left, I sat in my flat and thought about the father I'd never really known, and the inheritance that now felt like a burden rather than a blessing.

Chapter 77: The Woman in Blue [Detective Sergeant Jacob Archer]

Maejune23 Crime / Detective 8 hours ago

The description Sarah had given me was vague but distinctive. A tall woman with dark hair, wearing a blue coat, who'd left Thornfield Manor on Monday evening looking upset. It wasn't much to go on, but it was more than we'd had before.

I spent Wednesday evening running through Lord Ashworth's known associates. His ex-wife, Margaret, was sixty-eight and living in Cornwall. His business partner, Michael Hartley, was a man. His solicitor, James Pemberton, was male. His accountant, David Chen, was also male.

That left the women in his life. There was his daughter, Caroline, who lived in Bristol. There was his secretary, a woman named Patricia who'd worked for him for fifteen years. And there were various other women from his past—old girlfriends, former employees, women he'd wronged in business.

I started with the secretary. Patricia lived in Exeter, and I drove out on Thursday morning to interview her. She was a woman in her sixties, efficient and professional, and she seemed genuinely distressed by Lord Ashworth's death.

"Did you ever notice anyone visiting him who seemed upset or angry?" I asked.

"There was a woman," Patricia said carefully. "She came to the house perhaps five or six times over the past few months. The first time, Lord Ashworth seemed pleased to see her. But after that, the visits became tense. I could hear raised voices from the study."

"Do you know her name?"

"No, but I heard Lord Ashworth call her 'Catherine' once. I assumed it was a first name."

Catherine. It was a start. I asked Patricia to describe the woman, and her description matched what Sarah had told me. Tall, dark-haired, probably in her forties.

I spent the rest of Thursday making phone calls, checking records, trying to find a Catherine who might have had a connection to Lord Ashworth. It was tedious work, the kind of detective work that didn't make it into the television shows. But it was necessary, and I was patient.

By Friday morning, I had three possible Catherines. Catherine Morrison, who'd worked for Lord Ashworth's company fifteen years ago and had been fired under controversial circumstances. Catherine Winters, who'd been in a relationship with Lord Ashworth's son, Richard, about five years ago. And Catherine Blake, who'd been married to one of Lord Ashworth's business rivals.

I reported my findings to Leslie, who was impressed.

"Good work," she said. "Interview all three. One of them is our killer."

I wasn't entirely sure about that. The killer could be someone we hadn't even considered yet. But Catherine was a solid lead, and I was going to pursue it.

The first Catherine I interviewed was Catherine Morrison. She worked as a nurse in Exeter and seemed surprised to see me. But when I mentioned Lord Ashworth's name, something shifted in her expression.

"He destroyed my life," she said quietly. "Twenty years ago, he accused me of stealing from the company. I didn't do it, but he had enough influence to ensure I'd never work in that industry again. I had to start over from nothing."

"Did you visit him recently?"

She hesitated. "Yes. About six months ago, I saw him at a charity event. He didn't recognize me at first, but when he did, he laughed. He actually laughed about it. He said it had been good for me, that I'd turned out better than I deserved."

"And did you visit him at Thornfield Manor?"

Another hesitation. "Yes. I wanted to confront him, to make him understand what he'd done to me. But when I got there, I couldn't do it. He was just an old man. What was the point?"

"When was your last visit?"

"Three weeks ago."

So not Monday. I thanked her and moved on to Catherine Winters. She was a teacher in Bristol, living with her husband and two children. She seemed surprised to hear that Lord Ashworth was dead, but not particularly upset.

"I haven't seen him in five years," she said. "Richard and I broke up ages ago. I have no idea why you think I'd have any connection to his father."

I believed her. There was no guile in her response, no evasion. She simply didn't care about Lord Ashworth.

That left Catherine Blake. According to my records, she was married to James Blake, a businessman who'd competed with Lord Ashworth in the property development market. She lived in Devon, in a large house near Exeter.

When I drove out to interview her on Friday afternoon, I had a feeling this was the right one. Call it instinct, or call it the detective's sixth sense that Leslie had mentioned. But I knew, before I even saw her, that Catherine Blake was the woman in the blue coat.

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