Captain-Perian
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Comment on At the Crossing Where Love Found Me1 day ago
This is a beautiful story! I clicked on it and thought I might add the next chapter, but it is really great as a stand alone chapter. The moment, the message, the flood of emotions are all so nicely balanced. I can't imagine adding anything more.
Comment on A girl and her life PROLOGUE2 days ago
Your prologue leaves the reader with many mixed feelings. This young girl went through so much in her life so far. However, there is a cautious optimism that these new beginnings might bring new opportunities, new friends, and new challenges. It is reflective of real life, where most of us go through joys and sadness, successes and let downs, and uncertainty about the future. It will be interesting to see how your story develops.
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