Yea its like a video game/anime type of thing really

Agreed. You can't say things like that. There are children using this platform.

Bruh! Language!

Thanks

A. W. E. S. O. M. E. Period. That is not exactly Blaines perspective of the whole thing, but great job nontheless!

yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyeysyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesYES that would be amazing! I've always wanted this thing to become a comic/manga! I've always tried and failed to do so because I wasn't able to find the right footing. That sounds like a great idea. HOWEVER! I do want to oversee the whole project IF that's okay with you. I just really have a problem with people butchering stories when making like movies or stuff. But yeah that sounds like a great idea.

You wrote a good character. I have to admit that. Some of mine were half baked. Yours was slightly overdone and a little weird to read, but good job nontheless! I really want to try to recreate your character, if that's alright with you. And by recreate, I mean draw him out. Good job again!

But its amazing nontheless

WHA-HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA- HAT?! BRO! We didn't need to go THAT far! Total Plot Twist!

Remember Chapter 18?

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Thanks!"

I will no longer be posting this story on Fictish. However, I will continue to work on it and I should be able to sell it sometime in June, July, or August, depending on how lazy I'm going to get over the next few months.

Peak line from this chapter: "Shut up Brittany! No one cares about your opinion!"

Absolute. Complete. Cinematic. Masterpiece. Move out of the way, Babe and Wilbur. HUMPHREY IS IN TOWN!

That'll do, pig. That'll do.

Thanks! Your comments and appreciation push me to continue onward!

Its coming very soon, I promise.

By far the most gruesome beginning to a chapter I have ever written. I'm obsessed with anything EXE, so I think tht's where I was going for this chapter, a little bit of Sonic.EXE and s*** like that.

This is a f****** milestone for me considering this is my first story