Chesterfield
In the years since I retired, I have cultivated my hobbies of shor ...more
Joined: 21 Jul 2026
Last active: 5 hours ago
Comment on Who is behind Fictish?3 days ago
I also found Fictish through Word Hippo. I joined about a month earlier than you did. I'm enjoying writing in ways that I never could when I was a working stiff.
Watch out for Word Hippo, Some of the links will take you into dangerous territory.
I find that https://www.merriam-webster.com/thesaurus is a better source for synonyms.
CAUTION: There are at least two people who claim to be 'comic artists' who have contacted Fictish users about possible collaborations. I don't know if these are legitimate; I haven't checked them out. However, I am suspicious.
Did you ever find a definition/synonym for 'piemantle'?
Comment on Story Prompts: Escapades!5 days ago
Hey RedCat, Check out the adventures of my favorite character, a motorcycle-riding chipmunk named Chesterfield Chipmunk. Some of the stories are in the Fantasy folder, some in Humor, and some in Adventure.
Comment on The Library06 Sep 2026
Definitely an intriguing tale. However, what are 'hijinks' and 'a joke' in this bleak world without imagination and creativity? DON'T PAY TOO MUCH ATTENTION to my question; the story has too much value for you to be distracted by my words. And a minor point -- is it significant that the letter 'x' is used in several names?
Comment on Wolf’s Pass06 Sep 2026
Wow! What happens next? I'm eager to read of the combat between Doran and the monstrous, three-headed lupine Cerberus!
Comment on The Peregrine is Seeking Vengeance05 Sep 2026
Again, I have taken some text from the work of other writers. Thank you.
Comment on Ashes of a Life05 Sep 2026
I combined two parallel stories, "The Man at the River" and "Ashes of the Harvest" to create a strong foundation for another story I will write. Both of the existing stories are well written and include vivid imagery. I hope the original authors don't mind that I used their work.
Comment on Ashes Of The Harvest04 Sep 2026
This story reminds me of the poem by Robert Burns, "John Barleyccorn".
Comment on The Man at the River04 Sep 2026
Very intriguing start to what may become an epic tale! I like that it includes elements of mystery and fantasy in a literary form.
Comment on A Trip to Martha's Vineyard31 Aug 2026
This story, and its chapters, started as an exercise in using words which contain the letter combination 'ar' -- Farmer's Market on Martha's Vineyard, Dartmouth U, garden party, and so on.
Comment on anhedonia31 Aug 2026
Desperation, isolation, loneliness. anxiety, intense depression
"Empty and hopeless inside"
Hopelessness --- not only feeling hopeless about daily life, overwhelmed by day-to-day needs, but also feeling that there's no way to improve the situation, nor to heal his emotional distress
Overwhelmed by his emotional distress
Life will never change
Life is crushing me; it will never get better
Never ending distress
There is no future
Life is an enormous pile of s**t and I need a ladder to climb out.
Comment on Something in the Shadows24 Aug 2026
Add to my Personal Note on pronouns
You could also write something like "The Thief said"
Comment on Something in the Shadows24 Aug 2026
Like CrazyRickRiordanFan, I found this story brilliant and spooky. I hope an equally talented writer soon adds a chapter.
Personal Note: I dislike the use of the pronoun "they" when it is used to obscure the gender of one person. I really see no problem with using "he" or "she". If you must be gender-neutral, there is another neutral pronoun, "it". I would like to see more writers construct their sentences so that the third-person pronoun is not needed; for example, write "Vesper said" instead of "They said" or "It said".
Comment on The Locals Go Dumpster Diving20 Aug 2026
I meant to make this story a new chapter in my group of "Taco Truck" stories.
Comment on Rendezvous at Samarkand20 Aug 2026
Yes, I'm commenting on my own story.
Happy occurrence! Just two days after I submitted this story, I received the September 2026 issue of National Geographic magazine, which includes an article featuring Samarkand, Tashkent, and Bukhara.
Comment on What Happens In Vegas...20 Aug 2026
WOW!! I love it! So many delightful, amusing images! So much potential as a springboard for other stories!
Will we see more stories about leprechauns? I hope so!
I get a warm, happy dragon, feeling inside to read how you've built on one of my stories.
WELL DONE!
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