Thank you very much! I owe it to you for that awesome twist you thought of, it will definitely shake it up a bit, I'm excited to see how this contemporary x medieval crossover will develop!

Amazing idea you had here getting this thread started, if only until this site gets updated a little. Totally agree that we need a function to talk to each other a bit more freely.

This is amazing writing, keep it up! Welcome to the site :)

I understand your point, but (not to be rude of course) spellchecking and paragraphs isn't a must on this site, especially as it seems like a place to write without the worry and constraints of things like paragraphs and SPaG. And, the speakers are all young adults, it's meant to sound casual, and the lack of "breathing space", as it were, might add to the chaos and confusion of the scene anyway? I don’t know if this is really mine to say and if it’s not I'm sorry to have picked you up on it, and I know you didn't mean it in a belittling way, just authors trying to look out for authors. I'm sorry if I took this the wrong way, please try not to take offence to it. (I'm so sorry I waffled, sorry for writing a full-on essay here)

I love your writing! I feel like I'm involved in the characters' emotions reading it. Love the spin you've put on the start of the story, and I'm excited to see where it goes now, keep going :)

I love this! There is such beautiful description that I think will make for a really vivid and relatable world. I'm really excited to see where we can all make this story go!