I really like this, it has an important message pertaining to living in the present. In fact, this was actually the first thing i read when joining the website, and what gave me the courage to post my own work. Thanks for sharing you piece and Kudos to you c:

I absolutely adore this, the rhymes, line breaks, honestly, all of it is incredible. I can't wait to see what else you post, so PLEASE post more. Kudos to you and have a wonderful day :D