Good addition and contrast to Chapter 1. Feels like real families together.

Excellent story! Well-constructed and intriguing.

Very interesting. Could go a lot of different ways.

Loved "on a thing known as a QWERTY"!

My favorite fairy tale!

Really strong setup. I hope we'll see more of Gabbro soon! Is he the sort who dons spectacles and reads by candle lantern well into the night?

That's pretty awesome! :D

Oh, that's awesome!

I wonder who Delaney really is.

Nice! My Beloved and I play "Would you rather?" all the time.

A good intro. I wonder what happens if you stay there too long.

I love it! Great work! Little Bobby has a scheme....