Thank you! It's based on a dream I had

Very good introduction that sparks interest!

I love how you've formatted this story and the word choices! I can really feel the mystery and thrill!

Love the fact Alivia is getting back on her feet all the while sticking close to her faith!

Thank you ^_^

I never saw it that way ヾ(≧▽≦*)o

I like the suspense and the building up to the final moment! I must say that you surprised me with that plot twist in the end and your descriptions were very well done and I could easily visually the story as I read.