njagabriella
Joined: 12 Jan 2026
Last active: 7 Feb 2026
Replied to Riot45 in Our Parents Have Vanished04 Feb 2026
Thank you for you helpful critique. I will take note. I come from a technical background (very rigid), and my son says I write like a robot. With your rewrite, I can see what he means and will take your advice. .
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