I would definitely be Serena here with how I would also be telling my friend that the letter would have to be a scam. :) Thanks for sharing!

I really enjoy the path that you took here, and the contents of the letter!

I love where you took the story! You always have a way with words on your work. :)

What a wonderful start to the story, I really like how this sets the scene of what could come, thanks for sharing! :)

This is a really beautiful poem, and I think a lot of us can relate to the girl. Thanks for sharing! :)

I love your chapter two to this story, thanks for writing it!! :)

This was very much peaky comedy, and oh Ethan that would be so embarrassing in real life. Thanks for sharing! :)

That poor kitchen, I am really feeling for the parents right now. A wonderful start to the story, thanks for sharing! :)

This is too funny, I love the start to Emily's story, as well as, her voice and characterization. They really showcase your skills as a writer, and I hope to see more from you, thanks for sharing! :)

I loved this line "The old fashioned way to get in exercise was to chase them" it was too funny, and I love how creative you are, thanks for sharing! :)

The confusion is why I love stories, because it is always an opportunity to learn more, thanks for sharing! :)

Very interesting start to the story, and I completely understand as I use to work at a convenience store, you can't just give everyone a discount when you make minimum wage. Like that dime, those pennies, that quarter, it all adds up, and I never had it, my co-workers didn't either. That ending tho, I wonder where you were going with it? Thanks for sharing. :)

Mason sounds like a bully, I hope that he becomes a better person, especially when it shouldn't matter if his target is a girl or boy. Wonderful writing, and hope to see more of this story from you, and thanks for sharing! :)

I really loved the addition to the story, you are very creative, keep it up, and thanks for sharing!

That's too funny, it reminds me of someone I know who was named Dirt, and then there was someone I knew who nicknamed himself Loser. Thanks for sharing! :)

Very interesting, and it goes to show the about the addition of sugar and how they are like a drug. It reminds me of a documentary that I watched about how the cartel has it's food in everything including sugar, but it also reminds me of Parks & Rec with how the whole town is in love with Sweetums and not caring if it is bad for them. Thanks for sharing! :)

The wall? Now that is crazy, and funny. I hope to see more of Xavier, Miranda, and the wall. Thanks for sharing! :)

Poor Graham, I would not know what to do if I was him! Thanks for sharing! :)

Oh wow, that sounds like a crazy nightmare, I would 100% freak out if that was me, but what an interesting way to start a story, hope to see more, and thanks for sharing! :)

Oh no, a road block, I really loved the writing here, and thanks for sharing! :)