Chapters

Chapter 11: A man sits on a chair

GrapeMartini Literary / Fiction 22 Nov 2024

In a quaint village nestled between rolling hills and winding rivers, there lived a man who spent his days perched upon a weathered wooden chair on the front porch of his modest cottage. His eyes, a mirror to the vast expanse of his thoughts, gazed blankly into the distance as if searching for something just beyond the edge of his consciousness.

The man's mind was a void, a vast emptiness that seemed to swallow up any stray thought or fleeting emotion that dared to cross its threshold. He sat there, unmoving, a solitary figure against the backdrop of the bustling village around him.

Neighbors passing by would stop and exchange fleeting greetings with the man, but he hardly registered their presence. His mind was elsewhere, lost in the labyrinth of his own thoughts and memories.

Some said he was a dreamer, a man who had wandered too far into the recesses of his own mind and had lost his way back to reality. Others whispered that he was haunted by ghosts from his past, memories that clung to him like shadows in the fading light of day.

But the man paid them no mind. He remained on his chair, a silent sentinel guarding the threshold between the known and the unknown, his gaze fixed on a horizon only he could see. And there he sat, lost in the vast emptiness of his mind, a solitary figure in a world that seemed to have forgotten him.

Chapter 22: The First Stirring

Eckoepke Literary / Fiction 2 days ago

The change came so quietly that even the man did not notice it at first.

It began as a sensation rather than a thought—a faint pressure behind his eyes, like the suggestion of a tide before the water moves. The horizon he had been staring into for years wavered, not in sight but in meaning. For the first time in a long while, it felt less like an ending and more like a question.

A breeze slipped through the village that afternoon, carrying with it the scent of river water and turned soil. It brushed against the man’s face, lifting a strand of graying hair from his brow. He blinked.

The blink startled him.

It was a small thing, insignificant by any ordinary measure, yet it echoed loudly in the hollow chambers of his mind. The void did not vanish—but it shifted, as if disturbed. Something rippled across its surface, like a stone dropped into still water.

With the ripple came a sound.

Laughter—distant, bright, and fragile. It did not belong to the present moment. It arrived without context, without explanation, and yet it struck him with a sudden ache so sharp that his fingers curled against the arm of the chair. His breath caught. The laughter faded almost as quickly as it had appeared, leaving behind a residue of warmth and loss.

The man frowned.

It was the first expression his face had worn in years.

Across the road, a child paused mid-step, watching him with open curiosity. The man noticed this too—noticed the child noticing him—and for a fleeting instant, their eyes met. The child smiled, tentative and unsure, then ran off, as if afraid the man might disappear if stared at for too long.

Something inside the man tightened.

He looked down at his hands. They seemed unfamiliar, as though they belonged to someone else—older than he remembered, more worn. A thin scar crossed one knuckle, pale against weathered skin. He traced it with his thumb, and with that touch came another flicker: a hammer, a split board, a voice calling his name in alarm.

His name.

It hovered just beyond reach.

The village sounds grew louder then, creeping back into his awareness one by one—the creak of a cartwheel, the murmur of conversation, the distant call of a bell marking the hour. Each sound pressed gently against the walls of his mind, not demanding entry, merely waiting.

For the first time, the emptiness did not swallow them whole.

The man leaned forward in his chair. The wood groaned beneath his weight, a complaint born of long use and long neglect. He placed his feet flat against the porch boards and felt their solidity, their certainty. The world, it seemed, had been patient. It had remained where it was, even as he had drifted far from it.

As the sun dipped lower, casting long shadows across the road, the man lifted his gaze—not to the horizon this time, but to the path leading away from his cottage and into the village beyond.

He did not stand.

Not yet.

But the thought of standing—clear, deliberate, and undeniably his own—settled into his mind and stayed there.

And in that small, stubborn act of staying, the void began, at last, to give ground.

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