Chapters

Chapter 11: Blood and a horse

JHSorensen Western 8 May 2026

Blood... And a lot of it. They must have thought he was dead, or that he was going to die out here, or they just didn't care what happened to him after he hit the ground; either way, what he knew was that he felt like he should've been dead.

The creature that woke him kept prodding at him, the breath from its strong lungs rustling his hat, "Mmm... stop that" he said weakly, trying not to move. The thing kept prodding, and he kept not moving, it pressed its head up against him in a way that made him roll over on the dirt.

"Guh, dumb horse." The horse continued to make itself an obstacle until he finally relented, slowly sitting up and looking it in the eyes "What's your name, huh?" The horse, as a matter of fact, didn't speak English. "Fine, I'll just call ya dumb horse, that's what you are after all"

He made his first attempt in an untold amount of time at standing, he failed. A cough followed, no more blood though, the shots must not have hit anything important, good. He made a second attempt to stand, with more help from the dumb horse than he would have liked to admit.

Now that he was standing, he got a better look at what had woke him, it was a large, strong breed, clearly domesticated, but without a saddle. "You must have run off from a ranch somewhere, damn shame for the rancher... And me" He put his hand on his new companion, patting it on the head, then started to slowly walk in no particular direction. "C'mon dumb horse, let's go find where my money went."

Chapter 22: Tracks in the Dust

Riot45 Western 8 May 2026

The sun wasn’t doing him any favours. It hung low but hot, and every step beneath it sent a dull ache through his ribs. The horse followed close, too close, bumping its head into his shoulder every few steps like it was checking he was still alive.

“I ain’t dyin’,” he muttered, wiping sweat from his brow. “Not ’til I get my money back. After that, maybe.”

The horse snorted, unconvinced.

He paused at a patch of disturbed dirt: bootprints, several sets, all fresh. He crouched, winced, and pressed a hand to his side. The prints led west, toward the jagged silhouette of the canyon ridge.

“Figures,” he said. “Only idiots or outlaws go that way. And I ain’t an outlaw.”

The horse gave him a look that suggested otherwise.

“Don’t start with me.”

He stood again, slower this time, and scanned the horizon. No smoke, no dust trails, no riders doubling back to finish the job. Either they thought he was dead, or they were too stupid to check. He wasn’t sure which insulted him more.

The horse nudged him again, harder.

“What now?”

A vulture circled overhead, lazy and patient. Another joined it. Then a third.

“Great,” he said. “Even the birds think I’m dead meat.”

The horse lowered its head, sniffing the prints, ears flicking like it expected the men to still be standing there. He couldn’t blame it. The tracks felt recent enough to still be warm.

“Don’t fret,” he muttered. “Ain’t nothin’ out here but us and the wind.”

He straightened, slow and stiff, and followed the line of prints westward, where the land grew quieter: even the insects seemed to hold their breath. The sky stretched wide and pale, washed-out blue like an old bruise.

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