This is a very thorough deep dive into a topic I hadn’t considered much. You definitely have a knack for non-fiction writing.

You’re building a nice tension here. I’m feeling like something’s about to happen.

Clever!

Very high quality!

This has the making of a great adventure!

I hope you all enjoy this CYOA I crafted up. I’m excited to see where this narrative goes—sincerely, someone who grew-up reading goosebumps books.

The foreshadowing at the end was a nice touch.

I named this chapter after the song that inspired me to write it. Let Me Leave - Currents

Thanks! I was really trying to capture the experience of someone who keeps getting pulled out of reality by his own mind.

So do I. It’s fun being back on here!

“And mine… mine have seen things I would trade anything to forget.” This touched me.

Love this! the visual of the Cherry Motel was really striking. I just had to incorporate it into my next chapter!

I could see this having a really good twist at the end!

It’s amazing how something so simple can spark such an elaborate imaginative process!

There’s a lot of smashed together words, makes it very hard to read.

I love this, short and concise. Great tactile hook!

This chapter makes me feel nostalgic for a place I’ve never been.

It’s a well done first attempt!

I really like the callbacks to the first chapter. I love seeing everything piece back together!

Thank you. This was a lot of fun!